In my writing, I noticed that most
of my paragraphs my essays are not well focused. For example, I tend to go off
topic when writing essays. I start talking about one thing and end up writing
about a different topic. This is an issue on my essays because it makes my
essays vague, where I am talking about different subjects. Having unfocused
topics makes my essays weak because the body paragraphs don’t tie with the
thesis. It is difficult for me to have focused paragraphs because I want to
write many things about one subject. This is an error that I repeat constantly,
but I am going to read my essays and make them relate to my thesis or essay
topic.
Another error I make in my writing is that I don’t clarify my sentences
and repeat things constantly. For instance, I explain quotes or statements but don’t
always make my points clear. I also don’t
explain “why?” in my papers which makes my statements unclear. This type of
error makes my papers be redundant where I constantly repeat the words again. I can change this repeated error by questioning every sentence in my essay. The strategy of thinking why I add the a particular sentence in my essay, is going to make me noticed where I don't explain things in details.
I
also noticed in my essays that my thesis are not strong enough or are not
specific. When I write essays it’s hard to write my thesis because I tend to
make it too wordy. In my thesis, I included words that make my thesis have two
different meanings. A thesis describes the main topic of the essays; therefore,
I find it difficult to come up with a thesis where I am going to have to relate
to it throughout my essays. Even though, I make these mistakes constantly I am
going to read my essays multiple times, try not to go off topic, and look for
better sentence structure. This is going to make my essays stronger and have my
writing focus related to one subject.
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